• DosDude👾@retrolemmy.com
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    1 month ago

    Very good! You’re doing great. If you want some tips: When you’re using verbs in the I/ik form, you should write it singular. Like “komen” in the I/ik form is “kom”. Also if something is Dutch it’s “Nederlandse” not “Nederlands” like “Nederlandse muziek” and “Nederlandse taal”.

    Keep going, you’re doing great! Even though your choice of music is shit :p

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      1 month ago

      How dare you to insult the holy music :) Thanks for the Tips tho

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        1 month ago

        The only other mistake I can spot is a tough. When you say “Ik bezoek de Thunderdome dit jaar”, I would have written “Ik ga de Thunderdome bezoeken dit jaar”.
        Consider the nuace in English between “I visit X” and “I will visit X”.