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minus-squareInstantnudelOPlinkfedilinkarrow-up5·3 months agoHow dare you to insult the holy music :) Thanks for the Tips tho
minus-squareRednax@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up2·3 months agoThe only other mistake I can spot is a tough. When you say “Ik bezoek de Thunderdome dit jaar”, I would have written “Ik ga de Thunderdome bezoeken dit jaar”. Consider the nuace in English between “I visit X” and “I will visit X”.
How dare you to insult the holy music :) Thanks for the Tips tho
The only other mistake I can spot is a tough. When you say “Ik bezoek de Thunderdome dit jaar”, I would have written “Ik ga de Thunderdome bezoeken dit jaar”.
Consider the nuace in English between “I visit X” and “I will visit X”.
Ah, dankjewel :)